This writing is based on a painting by Helen Frankenthaler entitled Green Likes Muave, 1972
I sit in the tall reedy grass. It is a hot afternoon. The bayou sun beats down on my fur covered body. Fortunately I am small enough that the shade of the grass keeps me cool and protected because right in front of me is the green alligator. I have been trying to escape from him. He stealthily makes his way through the murky black water, creating very little wake. If I remember correctly he does that so we shoreline animals don’t detect his arrival.
The dragonflies and other insects quickly move out of his way. I don’t think they are worried about getting eaten by this creature. They move out of respect for his grand size.
I can see the white, sharp teeth that stick out of his jaws. He keeps his mouth open so he can grab a quick snack if one should become available. His eye darts from side to side, scanning the area from the weak and unsuspecting prey.
Although I know he holds no grudges against us shoreline creatures, he feels a great need to survive. However, i do not wish to become the next meal on his path of survival.
I resist the urge to turn and run in the other direction. Doing this would only draw attention to me and that could be a fatal mistake on my part. So for now I remain absolutely still. I wish I could warn the other creatures before it is too late; before those steely jaws are open and there is no escape. I am hungry myself, but I am too scared. There are tempting plants all around me, but if I make a sound, it could be my last.
So for now, I will sit here and wait for the alligator to disappear or forget about me. Please, don’t anyone make a sound.
amanda said,
July 9, 2009 at 03:29
Anne, What a great piece of descriptive writing! I love it!